More fic!

Sep. 3rd, 2013 07:58 pm
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I had to break this up into two posts.

This is the rest of the AU story. So, read this first. Unless you haven't read the first part. Then read that first.

Sam was already late by the time she walked out her front door. Late by her standards, which were pretty lax to begin with. Jack probably thought she wasn’t going to show up at all.

He opened the door before she had a chance to knock. Sam decided she would work on her timing. The thought of Jack pacing around his house and watching for her headlights in the driveway was more effective than all the ranting her father had ever done.

“Hey,” he said. “Did you have trouble finding the house?”

She let him take her coat. He brushed her hair back over her shoulder and Sam wanted to give him the rest of her clothes too. “A little,” she said. Mostly because she’d been driving faster than she could read street signs, trying to make up for the time she’d spent digging through her closet looking for the right thing to wear. “What are you making?”

“Lasagna.” He hung her jacket on a dining room chair and led her to the kitchen. There were enough empty pasta boxes and cheese containers hanging out on the countertops to let her know it wasn’t the frozen kind.


“Nah. It’s just noodles, sauce, and cheese. Anyone can make lasagna.”

Sam knew for a fact that wasn’t true. “If you say so.”

“I do say so. Beer?” He grabbed two bottles without waiting for her answer.


She followed him down the stairs to his living room. His furniture looked rugged and comfortable in the flickering light from the fireplace. There were a lot of military awards crowded onto the mantle. They looked impressive, but she didn’t know what any of them were. Her father would have been able to read Jack’s whole career in the secret code of brightly colored ribbons.

She was surprised to see pictures of a young boy that looked too much like Jack to be anything but his son. He seemed out of place, a lone indication of Jack’s life outside the Air Force.

“Your son?” Jack flinched enough to let her know that it was an unpleasant subject for him. A messy divorce or a custody battle that hadn’t gone his way.

“Yeah.” Jack tipped his bottle back and emptied it. Some extra courage. He ran his finger lightly around the edge of the frame. The smiling boy with the baseball cap looked like he had no idea what he’d done to make Jack look so serious. “Charlie.”

Sam was still going with the messy divorce theory. Catherine wouldn’t have tried to fix her up with Jack if he were married. At least she hoped not. “Does he live with his mother?”

“No. He died. Three years ago.”

Oh. Damn. “I’m so sorry, Jack.” Sam filtered everything she knew about him through that new piece of information. When she first met Jack, she thought he was too serious, too angry. Knowing about his son made her appreciate the fact that he was capable of anything else.

“Me too. He was...” Jack touched the picture again before turning around. “He was a great kid.” He walked up the stairs and Sam wished she could take the conversation back.

She sat on the couch and watched the fire. Jack was gone a half a beer longer than he needed to be. The oven door opened and shut. Then the refrigerator. Sam counted the ribbons above the fireplace.

“Do you want another beer?” His voice was right over her head. She looked up and Jack was leaning through the opening above the couch.

Sam looked at her bottle. “Not yet.”

He came down the stairs a moment later. The couch shifted as he sat next to her and propped his feet up on the coffee table. Sam straightened the hem of her skirt over her knees. Jack’s dead son stared at her from the wall. Maybe dinner dates were just never going to be their thing.

“Hey,” he reached over and un-straightened her skirt. “I didn’t mean to ruin the evening. I should have told you about Charlie before--” He waved his hand between them. Sam wasn’t sure what it meant.

“No. That’s-- I mean, how do you even bring something like that up?” Jack had the right idea about the beer. She finished hers and set the bottle on the table. The beer was good. Dark and hoppy. Not that cheap crap Colorado was famous for. “Besides, it’s still early. There’s plenty of evening left to ruin.”

“Good point.” He put his arm across the back of the couch, and his hand brushed her shoulder. She reached up and caught his fingers. They were warm and restless.

“Good points are my specialty,” she told him.

“I’ll keep that in mind.”

She let him pull her closer, settling into his side and resting her free hand on his thigh. She traced the denim seam on the inside of his knee. Jack’s fingers tightened around hers and his breathing took on an artificially even quality. Sam dug through her file of small-talk subjects, hoping to come up with something before her hand worked its way higher.

Jack beat her to the conversation punch with some big-talk. “So,” he said. “What did your father do to make you hate the Air Force?”

Sam’s vision narrowed and she let go of Jack’s hand. She wasn’t ready to talk about that with him. “Can we talk about something else?” Her voice didn’t waver much but Jack caught it anyway. He wrapped his arm tighter around her.

“Yeah, sure.” She only heard him because she was so close. “We can talk about whatever you want.”

Sam didn’t have anything else to talk about. Thoughts of her mother had taken over her brain. “We are really bad at dating,” she said.

He turned and brushed his lips against her hair. “I think we just need more practice.”

They sat on the couch until the oven beeped and Jack went back to the kitchen. He pulled the lasagna out to cool and fetched more beer. Sam gladly accepted one even though the first had gone straight to her head. She should have eaten lunch.


The lasagna would have been good even if she wasn’t starving and working on a decent alcohol buzz. All their dead family members stayed in the living room and their dinner conversation turned out a lot better than the couch conversation.

They ate at the small kitchen table. He’d offered to clear the dining room table, but Sam preferred the kitchen. Jack must have too; his dining room looked like it hadn’t seen a meal in years. There was a bottle of wine on the counter that might have been opened if they’d eaten in the dining room. The kitchen table was less demanding.

“That was really good.” She leaned back in her chair and was glad she’d gone with the loose fitting skirt.

“I told you, lasagna is idiot proof.”

It must not be genius proof, Sam thought. She could fuck up a lasagna with the best of them. It was probably too early to let him know that the toast was going to be the only home-cooked meal to come out of her kitchen. “You’re not an idiot.”

He shrugged and gave her a pointed look. “Depends on the company I’m keeping.” That was fair, but Sam had talked him through concepts she’d spent years studying. Jack slid his chair away from the table and changed the subject. “I have dessert,” he said.

“Please don’t let it be chocolate. If I eat anything else I might explode.”


“Cheesecake can wait.”

Jack stood up and started stacking dishes in the sink. She would have helped but his sleeves were rolled up again, and the beer had turned his naked arms into the most interesting thing in the room. He looked confused when he caught her staring at him.

“Well, I’m not sure what to do with you now,” he said. Right, because he was stuck with her until the alcohol worked its way out of her system.

Sam had some pretty good ideas about what he could do with her until then. Jack’s eyebrows scrunched together and Sam tried to get her ideas off of her face. He really needed to pull his sleeves down. When had she become so shallow? Maybe a walk would help.

She stood up and pulled him away from the sink. “Let’s go for a walk.”


The walk did help.

The stars were out in force, and Jack’s house was just far enough outside the city to avoid the worst of the light pollution. Jack held her hand and kept her pointed in the right direction while she stared at the sky.

He tucked the hand he was holding into his jacket pocket and led her through a wooded area that bordered a small park. Leaves crinkled under their feet reminding Sam that Halloween was just around the corner. Pumpkin pie season was her favorite.

They circled the park and headed back to Jack’s house. Their pace slowed to a crawl and she wasn’t sure which of them was to blame. They stopped at the top of the driveway. Sam’s car crouched next to his truck, waiting patiently for her return. The house was a squat brown temptation, telling her to ignore the car and come back inside where it was warm.

Jack walked her to the side of the car and pulled her into his arms. Maybe the house was tempting him too. She slid her hands under his jacket and warmed her nose against his chest. It was getting late and she was still running on not enough sleep. The thought made her yawn. “I guess I should go home.”

He tightened his arms around her waist and kissed the top of her head. A flock of dry leaves skittered around her ankles. She closed her eyes and listened to them scatter into the night. Jack’s voice rumbled against her forehead. “Are you sure you’re okay to drive?”  

There was an invitation hiding inside that question, like his mental decision-making coin had landed on its edge and was waiting for her to push it over. She tapped it and was surprised when it landed car side up. “Yeah. I’m fine.”

Sam drove home on roads that had been stretched like taffy, giving her too much time to think. By the time she pulled onto her street, she wasn’t even tired anymore. It seemed unfair. The temperature had dropped while she was gone and her house was too cold. It was a fleece pajama and hot tea kind of night.

She was in the middle of filling her teapot when she realized she’d been wrong.


Somebody in Jack’s neighborhood had a bit of a wind chime fetish. Sam listened to the discordant tones while she walked to his front door. Her finger hovered over the doorbell a moment. It was possible he’d gone to bed. Without her. She knocked softly instead.

She was about to leave when the door opened. Warm air swirled around her ankles. Jack looked soft and worn in the hazy porch light. He’d changed into something more comfortable while she was gone. Not fleece pajamas, but close.

“Sam.” Jack managed to pack a lot of question into her name. “What’s--” He looked behind her like the answers were pulling into the driveway. “Is everything okay?”

“I was wrong,” she said. “About being able to drive. I think I need to stay.”

“Oh,” he said like that made any sense, and then again when it actually did. “Oh.”


Jack led her down his hall like they were an old married couple heading for their afternoon nap. Whatever nervousness she’d brought with her didn’t survive the walk. He seemed to have enough for the both of them.

“Sorry about the mess.” He shoveled laundry off his bed and kicked some shoes toward the corner of the room. “I wasn’t expecting... this.”

Sam watched him from the doorway. The light from the hall cast a long Sam-shadow over his bed. “I kind of was.”

Jack smiled at her like maybe he’d at least thought about it. He grabbed a pile of neatly folded towels and dropped them on top of the shoes. They flopped over with a dramatic flair. Sam thought maybe she should have called first. Clearly, the towels would have appreciated some warning.

Jack gave the room a final glance before walking over and taking her hands. The scar above his eye caught the light. She’d never asked how he’d gotten it. She let him pull her into the room, and he moved his hands to her face, staring into her eyes like she was the most amazing thing in the universe. Sam thought she might melt. “Are you sure about this?”

Driving all the way back to his house seemed like a pretty clear signal, but maybe the question wasn’t really for her. She stepped closer to him, and he pressed his forehead to hers. “Are you?”

“Yes,” he said. He kissed her to prove his point, and his hands used the break in the conversation to find their way under her shirt. Sam considered it a small victory when they weren’t interrupted by a phone. “Definitely, yes.” Jack fumbled with her bra for a moment before giving up. She reached behind her back with one hand and unclasped it for him, pulling it off with her shirt. Jack forgot where her face was.

“It’s just-- It’s been a while,” he admitted.

His hands on her breasts were pretty sure they remembered what to do. They trailed over her ribs and she shivered. “Don’t worry,” she said. “It’s like riding a bicycle.”

She slid Jack’s sweatpants down over his seasonally appropriate underwear. Day-glo jack-o-lanterns grinned at her like spending the day in Jack’s pants was the best gig ever. She wondered if he wore them to work. Frivolous underwear to balance out his work persona.

His hands paused just above her waistband, and he pulled his mouth away from her neck so he could look at her. He was wearing the wrong expression for the situation.

“What the hell kind of bicycle did you have?” He asked that like he really wanted an answer. Even the pumpkins on his boxers looked expectant.

Sam pushed him back to the bed, and he sat in her shadow. “Stop talking.”


The boxers didn’t last long. They were still smiling when she tossed them off the side of the bed.

Naked was a good look on Jack. He stretched out beside her, and she ran her hand down his chest. The muscles in his stomach jumped under her touch. She went lower, running her knuckles lightly down his length. He exhaled slowly for a moment and leaned his head back against the mattress. There was a deep scar on his shoulder. She kissed it and moved her hand back up, sliding her fingers around him on the way.

“Jesus. Sam.” His voice was strained and breathless, and he grabbed her hand, pushing hard against it before moving it back to his chest where it couldn’t cause any trouble. “Out of practice, remember?”

“Sorry,” she said. It was a lie. She wasn’t sorry at all.

“I think,” he said while he rolled on top of her. “That you-” His mouth worked its way down her chest and her breath hitched when his tongue circled her nipple. “Are-” He sucked at the skin just below her navel. Sam shifted her legs because she was smart enough to know where he was headed. “A liar.” It was his his last word on the subject because his tongue found something better to do.

She thought she had a witty reply that, but lost all her words when he eased one finger inside of her. She already had a bit of a thing for his hands; this wasn’t going to help. He teased her orgasm out of her, taking her just to the edge and keeping her there long enough for her to consider sending him to join his underwear and finishing by herself.

“Jack,” she managed through her frustration. He responded by increasing the pressure of his tongue. Not by a lot, but it was enough. He held his hand flat against her stomach, keeping her still, and added a second finger. Some more words fell out of her mouth and she felt her chest flush.

Jack repositioned himself so his head was resting on her stomach. She toyed with his hair and concentrated on breathing. If this was out of practice, she might just pass out next time. She was still considering next time when he moved up to finish this time.

He slid into her with one smooth motion that was almost too fast. Almost. Sam wrapped her legs around him and held him still. He looked down at her. His eyes were shadowed and his voice was soft. “You okay?”

Sam was so far beyond okay she couldn’t see it anymore. “Yeah,” she said. She relaxed her legs and lifted her hips. Jack pushed deeper and paused like he was summoning all the self-control he could find. He didn’t find much, probably because Sam wasn’t very helpful.

She scraped her nails down his side and pulled her knees back. Jack cursed quietly into her ear and started to move faster and with less finesse. It was mean, she knew that, but it was just so damn hot to make him lose control like that. She swiveled her hips in tight circles and felt like she’d found her super-power when he cried out and collapsed on top of her.

She let him stay there for a while with his face buried in her neck. “You’re heavy,” she said when she felt the need to breathe more freely. He slid to her side and draped an arm over her chest.

The room was starting to feel cold and Sam tried to find the blankets with her feet. She came up empty. Jack used the last of his energy to crawl down the mattress and grab the comforter off the floor. He pulled it over them and curled up behind her.

“Hey,” he said into the back of her head. “I think we’re getting better at this dating thing.”

Sam agreed. It might not have much in the way of competition, but this was definitely their best date yet.

Date: 2013-09-04 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
This is just so good. Since I don't have Jack, I need chocolate now. Lots of chocolate.

Date: 2013-09-05 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

Chocolate is a good consolation prize.

Date: 2013-09-04 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Omg this is fabulous! love it!

Date: 2013-09-05 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you!

Date: 2013-09-04 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
You liar, you did not forget how to write sex scenes! That was the perfect combination of awkward (with the poor towels that didn't get advance warning and messy bedroom), funny (hahahaha, jack-o-lantern underwear with the best job evar!) and hot (*fans self*).

Loved this line: Her father would have been able to read Jack’s whole career in the secret code of brightly colored ribbons.

And: He brushed her hair back over her shoulder and Sam wanted to give him the rest of her clothes too. Good lord, yes, I totally would have handed over all my clothes would have had that same reaction!

Date: 2013-09-05 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
The sex parts took FOREVER.
The tone of the story was just a weird mix of humor and serious and getting that right while they were naked was just not working. So. I'm glad the mix came through in the final version.

I think I just love the idea of Jack having underwear for every occasion. I can't wait till Christmas. Oh, and I'm sure he has some sort of turkey underwear for November.

Yeah, I can see why Sam wants to throw her clothes at Jack.

Date: 2013-09-04 10:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-09-05 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

Don't you owe me a LOCI fic?


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